You Just Dont "Fit In" Like Fat Women Tryin On Super Model's Jeans How You Supposed To Win When The Villans Always Die In The Battle Scenes!! Who Really Writes The Rhymes? Is It You, Ya Brother, Or Are Ya Double Teamin Vinny's Kinda Like The Bermuda Triangle The Way They Both Swallow (( red fire trucks ))!! Your Decline Is Too Steep "Brush" This Sourassrex Aside The Way This Battle's A Clean Sweep Sad After Defeat? Nah Vincent's Used To Rejection-When He (( mows the lawn )) His (( Mind )) Falls Asleep!! What You Got (( Condominiums)) For? Your (( Snow Boots )) Get No Elevation Like Flat Tires You're Not That Good, You Need To Start "Exercising The Truth" Like Fat Liars!! Like A Guy Wit A Small (( mind )) Vinny's Spits Get No Oohs And Ahs No One Likes You, You Got As Much Support As Old Women Wearin No Bras!! *** Here's the thing. This is "off topic" so I suppose it's ok to post your "freestyle". What's not ok is to use vulgar language so I have taken the liberty of some minor changes to your lyrics. As you can see, I am not very good at rhyming. If I see any more vulgarity, I will elminate the topic. [Edited by: DeputyDawg on Jan 7, 2004 5:05 PM]
Freestyles, please post your freestyle
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Freestyles, please post your freestyle
/** i thought ur freestyle was cute... refreshing 2 c a lyrical artist in a gaming arena. i'm a busy man, so i'll get straight 2 the point... i am 'o.d. pronounced odd' of krisis entertainment [neoqrisis.com], other than developing java games and software solutions i tour manhattan literary venues with cataclysm productions on occassion [cataclysmproductions.tripod.com]... i figure y not give u some comp., if not 2 keep u rhyming since no one else seems 2 bother... fortunately my abilities dont require vulgar language... */ // also i always start a set with this :: i apologize // 4 being here, i'm terrible... What villain? i'm outside the spectrum But i pierce the game's rectum, impair ur terrible lyrical mentions 2 get mentioned, and toast ur chin 2 get cheered UR rogue lines need chairs, relax Re-organize and repair, ur really stretching ur vocabulary Wearing down similes 'til they mean less UR style seems 2 b free 4 a reason Text in disarray leads 2 inferences from how readers interpret the contents After examining the context - Clutch must
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Vinny Unless u meant 4 ten lines 2 b non-sense...