it seems i'm not the only poem writer in here any more so i thought i could make this folder for everyone that has a good poem to post it in.
I REALLY LIKE lone wolf an chassidy's WORK.
POEMS!!!
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Thank you Charger7 Here is a poem I just wrote last night. From the inside What goes on deep down inside, Is something you don't show on the outside. You act as if nothing is wrong, Deep down inside you feel you don't belong. As you sit there watching the time go by, You then begin to cry. You feel as though your going insane, Then someone see's all your pain. It's amazing to see what a person can endure, And still be able to reasure. Before you go to bed and when you awake, It's there just like a quake. There are times you feel like your going to burst, Because your afraid of being hurt. You keep your eyes on the sky, It gets easier as time goes by. Life is sometimes so frustrating, You don't need someone underestimating. This is something that is not bought, Some are aware but most are not. Things happen in life for a reason, No matter what time of season. In life we don't ask for what we recieve, Just be thankful and believe. You will never forget the past, But someday it will be over at last. And when that time comes, Just look back and see what you have overcome. God is there the whole way, So don't think he's gone astray. Life can be a mystery, But there is always a theory.
here is a poem i just wrote .while i was taking a brak off line ..lol which isnt to often :p
THE PRAYER
Somtimes i wonder what lifes all about
The screaming , the yelling.. just why do they shout
They dont understand, that it hurts our young eares
It brings sadness and sorrow, and a great many tears
Its a everyday thing now. but ive heard it for years
And its starting to bring out , the worse of my fears
In the morning when they wake up . they dont even smile
They havent done that in a very long while
I love them so much . but there hurting me so
i cant take the fighting . i feel i should go
Im trapped in there prison, where i shouldnt be
I just want to get out .. i want to be free
So im praying to you God for the first time in my life
Can i please have my parents back ... can u pull out the knife
Im praying so hard . i need to so bad .. i need the love in my life..
that we all once had
So if you can hear me ..Ill owe u so much .
You know what i need ...its my parents loving touch
So if you can do this ..and make it all better..
Then ill know your the master. uve put a family together
Thankyou God for listening
chassidy 12 may 2003
Great writing to u both, u have done it once again, and i too believe deeply that everything happens for a reason, there is a porpuse behind every little thing.
Excellent Poems!! I love reading them! Keep it up! You both have a talent, dont waste it! You guys should publish it! Sandy
i would like to dedicate this one to all the ppl who have met a special person online. it is realy a great feeling to have met somone online and grow close to . fellings online can be very very real.. dont let anyone tell u online relationships mean nothing..they realy do
ONLINE
I had a dream the other night
And u were in it too
We were running in a field
Catching the morning dew
The sun was shining bright
and the wind blew thru your hair
and i could feel all the love
that you and me both share
The dream was so realistic
I could even feel your touch
then i held you in my arms
and said... i love so so much
Although weve never met yet
I knew deep in my heart
this dream was trying to tell me
that we were close ..not far apart
ive told you many times before
that i promise we will meet
and i really truly mean this
ill never accept defeat
let me leave you with this thought now as i lay down, to dream once more
your the only one person in my heart
your the one that i adore
You brighten up my every day
you make me feel alive
your smiles ..yours charm your loving thoughts
are what helps me to survive
im so happy that we have met online
you brighten up my day
and dont forget my dearest friend
were not that far away
chassidy/13may/03
Wowsers chass, your doing wonderful work, I'm very impressed. You have a lot of talent. More then you might like to admit. :)
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This might ring a bell, Then my mom ran the dog over when he pulled into the driveway last night, which distressed her so much she comitted suicide, leading to my dad running away to join the French Foreign Legion and causing me and my brothers to be placed into foster care with a family who's religion forbids homework. Sorry Miss. Can I have an extra day?
this isnt a poem.. this is a song i wrote .. i wrote this for a friend .. he played this song for his g/f but unfortunatly she didnt show for the concert .. she never did get to hear it and they went there seperate ways ..
but here it is anyway .. maybe someone will relate to it .. .
Tell Me Why
Its been three weeks or more
Since the last time i saw you
I think about you every day
And i dream about you too
Oh i remember all the things weve done
And all the things we've said
And i remember when i held you tight
But now.. you turn your head insted
Please tell my why
Oh did it ever even matter at all?
Did you ever even care at all?
How come you never ever answer my call ? Just to hear ...that i love you
Please tell me why
How come you never said it mattered at all?
You know ill catch you any time that you fall
How come you never said you loved me at all?
Ive got to know
Oh well i feel that i dont mean much
And i dont know what to do
I feel that you dont hear much
When i say that i love you
And well i know im not a dreamer
And you know my love is true
But it feels like you dont feel much
When i get real close to you
Three weeks ago it wasnt like that
you used to hold me in your arms
you used to smile and laugh and giggle
and pleasure all my charms
But now if feel that you don't care much
and i just dont know what to do
But girl you know.. . i'll always love you
thru good or bad times too
I dont know what has happened
I just dont understand
three weeks ago ..you and me... were always hand in hand
So can you ........
Please tell me now
Does it even realy matter at all
if i catch you when your starting to fall ?
will you pick up the telephone when i call?
to tell me if it realy matters at all
ive got to know
And so the next time that i see you
I hope you'll under stand
i hope that you will love me
and reach out with you hand
We've had so many good times
And yes weve had some sad times too
but just please listen when i tell you
that i truly do love you
I guess ill leave you with your thoughts now
and ill wait for your reply
and ill sit right here for ever
just to hear you tell me why
Just tell me
Why it should'nt even matter at all ?
or why you coould'nt even answer my calls?
or why it never even mattered at all?
or should i catch you when your starting to fall? or why i should'nt even love you at all ?
or why it has'nt ever mattered at all ?
or why shoud'nt i even care at all?
or did you ever even love me at all?
or does it even really matter at all?
ive got to know
Please tell me whyty _chEEky_ i put it here for ppl to see .. oh i sure hope it didnt upset u to . it wasnt meant to upset anyone ..sry if it did
Here is one maybe somone can relate to ..
The Dot
I got a demerit.. on my nick... Cuz i was bad.. at the forum .
oh me.. oh my ...feels like a paw.. with a thorn
So i dont know now.. what to do
But i better watch.. what i say
but just when will that stupid... lil dot go away
About half past 8 ...i noticed it there
OOOOOh my god.. i nearly pulled ..out my hair
I dont think ..i desirved it .. cuz he is so a jerck
And you can bet now,.. he's sitting there...
with his little smirk
The things that he said ...were definetly rude
he doesn't think about people...
he can be really crude
but does it look like i care .
Na.. my dot will be gone ..
and ill be back in pool ..
before very long.
But i stand up for my comment
others think i was right
But the next time i on
ill try to be more polite
Cuz somone didn't like it
now i got a black dot
Ill use a different nick next time
mabye i'll avoid getting cought
But for now a fare well
and to all a good night
Oh just one more thing here
FLYORDIE'S a cool site...
I had to say that ...so fly don't get mad
cuz if i go get banned now.....my best friend will be sad
Chassidy 15 may/ 2003Just a lil humourous poetry
NOTE: This poem is not intended to make fun of..nor does it insult or damage the integraty of any particulaur individual...and does not colflict with the rules of the forum ...THAT I AM AWARE OF.. if it does i am sorry .. i didnt know you werent allowed to post funny poetry in the forum .. just thought maybe someone needed a smile or might make a few people laugh that might need one today .. sry if anyone feels pointed at ..or made fun of .. or unsulted in any way shape or form. if you think so then u must be reading my sence of humour wrong... Holy im starting to sound like Mr whatz his name
It sure is nice to see somone get a smile or a chuckle around here...General Hawk ..sure beats ppl gettin ridiculed and or insulted doesn't it .. ty for the hahaha's ..have a nice day..:) [img=
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Very VERY nice Linda! Bravo! I totally relate to that poem.(The first one I mean)Good work! Tell me if this is good Linda. Approaching night Gently wraps Her sequined cloak of glittering stars Around a troubled earth Sleep now and night will help To heal the worried mind of anxious men And respite Bring back to life rejected Problems of the day subside Hidden in night's protective veil Come quikly night And soothe all pain Refresh and make a man Make him whole again Befoer the dawn apears anew Weeping once more her morning dews
Another installment very soon And then i will bend a spoon Im not taking this poetry serious Because i am becoming delirious Im just doing this for a schoolboy laugh Doing poetry to hone my craft Pretty soon i will be a master And will fill rooms up with laughter The more i practice the talent will be growing And from the start rhymes will be flowing So maybe soon i will come back With a talent with which now i lack god as u can see i cant do this and im bored at skewl
um, Chris babe? except for the last 1, your just wasting space. plz dont spam this was a somewhat serious topic
now i'll try this thing again >>LOST LOVE Winter's white fingures Frosting branches Trees and fields Move silently on White winter tress pose Adorned in lace robes of snow Temporary guise A soft gentle carried on the evening breeze Whispers "He is here" Haunting melody Sad requiem for lost love Always remembered >Lol I aint very good at this poetry thing, but i try
Respect read?
4.1 Technical destruction: large pictures, empty messages or any other action which changes the size of the forum or hinders its regular use.
not mean any disrespect but its against the rules
I Swear The wind is whispering The rising moon Puts a spell upon my heart Under stars-Twinkling high above When l close my eyes We'r dancing into the flame l won't spend Finally time to decide Stuck here in the same old bind l'll be there By the moon and the stars Like a shadow that's by your side l swear
I love you Chassidy your lovely:D:D:D I love these games I dunno why, They get into your soul and will never die, Sometimes I chat sometimes I don't, But if I do its what makes this site what others are not, I can be humorous, naughty and sometimes not very nice, Then they ban me and sometimes they don't, Either way I'm happy with my lot, Some MODs are cool and others are not, I won’t mention names but I luv Streamy a lot, Once I challenged a player and had to do it again and again, So he quite politely whispered me to go away, Well I was feeling quite contentious and told him what I thought, This went on for ages and we played a game whilst we fought, Now we are best of buddy’s and he is a good sport, Now I was playing a game and this player did a lucky shot, So I said you lucky f***, Do you wanna be banned was his retort, I thought calm down sonny, I was only saying what I thought, Then he grassed me up and I was instantly banned, No warning no comment just a two day ban, Now you can imagine my anger at such an over reaction. So hear is my poem, I’ve said what I thought, My last comment was pulled, It happens a lot, I’ve mentioned no names, So let it stand, It’s quite entertaining when everything rhymes.
Gray Rainy Day
Tiny ripples pierce the bronzy surface Of still waters filled with autumn's gown, Tears of heaven's sorrow Gently falling down. Silently they touch the Cracked and broken earth. No song bird left to sing Of joyousness and mirth. My heart cries out in pain That I can share this beauty with no one, So I walk alone in a world with cloud-bound sun. My arms wrap around me tight, Seeking warmth for my skin. The soft and gray dim light Chases shadows in calm wind. Serenity sets, and peace is found within.
Thanks X-Honna...maybe I'll dig up another one :P Been a long time since I've written poetry
A silly one I wrote about the how we get too many messenger windows open at once. Hope you enjoy! One Window Too Many Omg that was so LMAO! oh no, where did u go? brb, she said to me hb, hb, u know me! I must know what..... BRB again? will I ever hear the end? I'm back, wb, I say ty, yw, very mannered thing to say BRB. grrrrrrrrr *** will I ever know soon I gotta go. They did it, it was true did what, I ask of you? Been so long I forgot what was we talking about? I got to go m8 I 4got I got a d8! lol (h) & (k) c ya l8r.
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CALM Yes, this world is beautiful and shining. It calms and softens my soul. Even if this proves that my soul is funny or crazy or broken. Even so, it makes me happy to believe this. l want to treasure the presant when l can believe this. >Extra:This world is not beautiful. Therefore it is.
Morning poem: I woke up early one morning... The earth lay cool and still But suddenly a tiny bird perched on my window sill It sang so softly so lovely and so gay that suddenly all my troubles began to slip away... It sang of far of places of laughter and of fun and slowly his lovely song brought up the morning sun I sneaked beneath the covers... crept slowly out of bed... then gently shut the window and crushed his f***ing head. I am not a morning person.
Hello, I got a little poem (if it is a poem). Didn't wrote it tho. Just one i can't forget :)
Smile to evreyone But give your heart to the only one.
Here is one, someting very different:
You never know when the world is gonna blow and if it's gonna... you got to go go go !!!?
Here is a poem in dutch (for the people that can read)it :)
Maak nieuwe vrienden maar behoud de ouden de nieuwe zijn zilveren en de oude gouden
Hello.. I got another one.. and hmm last one was: Give your smile to evreyone* but your heart to the only one Shy? or Fears? Am I too shy even to say hi? too shy... i dunno, why? Or am i too scared for my fears? dunno, maybe i can say it into 'tears'? I feel empty, is it cause I don't got a soul? or just I rarely use my brains? But hey- Who cares? I don't like to be smard or have a frozen heart. Why does people want to shine in the sunny light? and always wants to be bright. ps: I know my Englesh is bad but Hey- I don't feel sad. Anyways- Who cares?
Doesn't really read in a nice ritme, but Hey- who cares? :p
"Maak nieuwe vrienden maar behoud de ouden de nieuwe zijn zilveren en de oude gouden" translation: make new friends, but keep the old, one is silver; the other, gold =) very nice wirindre
Lol this JUST poped in my head. Ok, ok....let's see here. Tell me if it's any good. Since l am just making it up as l go lol. :p l sit upon my chair thinking Laying down to wonder if you are winking Winking at me or at nothing Maybe your at all l could never tell You were to tall You fought away all my fears Wiped away my tears l can only linger in you death you said l love you With your last breath Why did you have to go Your lips they were oh-oh Can't get you out Out of my head l sit and pout Just all about the way we used to share Share things about our past Our hearts and souls became bare As everthing we'd gladly share We were so close And yet so far We met eachother at the bar You bought me a drink And l excepted Though you weren't at all what l exspected We began to talk Then we would walk You walked me home You held my hand You told about your dream to join a band We were alone And l said l love you You looked at me You blushed and turned red Then you said to go to bed Like l was your little girl Like you knew me all my life The next youasked me to be your new wife I said yes Then you died And told Wes not to worry Said he was the man of the house He's 16 and has a spouse You told to Watch over me And you spoke to only me Asked him to leave And he refused l showed him out And saw his pout Just like yours You spoke to me And l had tears You fought away all of my fears Wiped away that one tear l can't help but linger in you death You said l love you With your last breath
>>>Here's 1 i got from Free Fall >>>l can kinda relate with this in some ways and just thought it was coolie :) Keep up the good work J ;) One day l was sitting, watching the world pass me by The next l was waiting, waiting to die Life didn't seem to have a point anymore. What was the point of trying to fly? When l kept getting up, my feet flipped out from underneath me, seemingly, not even wanting me to try But then l met this person, and he changed my life around He's the best friend i'v ever had. He's the best friend i'v ever found l'm sure if you have a special person like this in your life, you'll get where i'm comming from, cos until l met this guy, l didn't feel like l belonged But now every day l have something to look foward too And l just wanna tell you buddy, how much that l adore you! Your the best, you easily beat the rest So thank you for being you mate And finding me before it was to late
X i already told u, dont bring back my poems plz because i really dont want u to. y did u go bring it back?
lol sry Free fall l brought it back because l liked it and l didnt think your poems should sit and collect dust so to say :p Sry :( l didnt want to copy so i said it was from u atleast ;) rite? :\ Ok, well sry :( plz no mad? :)
X i also explained y i didnt want them brougth back, dude i dont see y u just left it where it was, if ppl wanted to see poems they could do a search on it. yes mad but dont wanna get banned lol :|
:( sry l don't remmy u explaining and l won't bring any others of your back. Kk? l poromise :) Sry again