The Truth Something that he once told me Something that I never wanted to let go Believing in every moment Is something I should not show. The greatest reason for belief is trust I don’t think he had the passion But I’m sure he had the lust. I remember the day he told me When he knew I wasn’t that naive I was the only girl for him and yet I wanted to believe. The feelings just grew stronger with each and everyday But there was that doubt That never really went away The feelings that I had when he said he couldn’t talk The trust in my heart that he continuously broke I could not explain it Until this very day That he was not my guardian He did not protect from pain. The things I’ve loved about him The things I thought were true Were just the part about him I never really knew I wish I could go back in time And say some things to him I wish I could change his mind And tell him what I mean… I wish I could pretend That I really don’t care And just forget about it And say that it was a dare Just thinking of his face, his voice Makes me remember “us” The time when all we had was the love we had inside. And I would never do that I would never hurt him now I loved him more than anything … Anything in life. by: Hana Shipp
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Very good Hana... i liked it... but on a grammical notice, put commas after each line except the one that ends the stanza or supposite sentence...
Yeah true Nas, but when it comes to writing poetry there are no rules... I can write it the way I like, and put commas or periods where I like, but thanks anyways :p
"SUPPOSITE" HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE, PROBABLY BECAUSE IT'S NOT A WORD?
I don't believe you wrote that. It's too good a poem it should be in a book. It also made me cry. Now my armor is rusting. What book did you copy that poem from?