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My English Poem
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My English Poem
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My English Poem
Hi I wrote this poem for English and wondered if you liked it. 

Her lips were red, her looks were free,
Her beauty was unbound,
Forever in my heart bide her,
An angel I had found.

Her voice so sweet, her eyes shone out,
My heart was hers to keep,
This beauty sent from lord above,
Cut in my soul so deep.

Her beauty lives forever more,
But her I cannot save,
To save her from a life of pain,
My life to her I gave

FRANCESCO TOTTI
Here is Another Poem About My Home Town and Rugby Written in Scots.

                         

Raise a glass tae obody here, a band o’ freens the gither.
Enjoying crack, a dram or twa’ an’ guid auld appy blither.
What makes us yin, in heart and soul, and like brithers tae each awe.
An auk’ard shape o’ lither, the guid auld rugby baw.

Raise a glass to man above, for a gift to you he blist, 
For wi’oot the bonny oval shape, jist think whit we’d hae mist,
Now never take for granted, how blist you hae awe been,
Tae run oot on a rugby pitch adorning Dunbar green,

Privileged tae play the game that’s part o’ awe oor life,
We get the gither; go on trips and dinnae tak the wife, 
Efter games wi cuts and pains fir beer the bar ou’ll fled,
A few of hours of good banter, get tanked then awf tae bed.

We’ve seen grand slams and triple croons and famous Scottish wins,
We’ve had to watch the English win the world cup for oor sins,
But when oor the years ye gither spewing memories sae rife,
Remimber oot’ this egg shaped gem, inco’plete wid be oor life.

Friend’s you’ve got awe oor the world thanks tae the rugby baw,
Toulouse, Wales and Skerries, rugby brithers in them awe,
No other sport will open doors and make life mair complete,
Nae other sport an enemy, wi hug and pint you’ll greet.


I think you’ve heard enough o’ me, I’ve raved and I have ranted,
But a gift you’ve been given, never take that gift for granted,
Without it pairer, life wid be, an oor friendship could hiv faw,
So stand up tall and face your friends, and toast the rugby baw. 

FRANCESCO TOTTI
wow! really good poems! i liked them alot. much better than my poems. lol
Thank you very much they took a long time :p
You have a great talent there. I have to admit, the English spoken in UK differs greatly from that spoken in USA. Keep up the excellent work.
Rose
im gonna try to come up with a poem and then ill get it on. i wrote one that was really good and its in my notebook which is somewhere around here. ill get it on. btw it involves love and another one involves death dancing.