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it seems i'm not the only poem writer in here any more so i thought i could make this folder for everyone that has a good poem to post it in. 
I REALLY LIKE lone wolf an chassidy's WORK.
Thank you Charger7

Here is a poem I just wrote last night.


From the inside


What goes on deep down inside, Is something you don't show on the outside.
You act as if nothing is wrong, Deep down inside you feel you don't belong.
As you sit there watching the time go by, You then begin to cry.
You feel as though your going insane, Then someone see's all your pain.


It's amazing to see what a person can endure, And still be able to reasure.
Before you go to bed and when you awake, It's there just like a quake.
There are times you feel like your going to burst, Because your afraid of being hurt.
You keep your eyes on the sky, It gets easier as time goes by.


Life is sometimes so frustrating, You don't need someone underestimating.
This is something that is not bought, Some are aware but most are not.
Things happen in life for a reason, No matter what time of season.
In life we don't ask for what we recieve, Just be thankful and believe.


You will never forget the past, But someday it will be over at last.
And when that time comes, Just look back and see what you have overcome.
God is there the whole way, So don't think he's gone astray.
Life can be a mystery, But there is always a theory.

here is a poem i just wrote .while i was taking a brak off line ..lol which isnt to often :p

             THE PRAYER

Somtimes i wonder what lifes all about
The screaming , the yelling.. just why do they shout
They dont understand, that it hurts our young eares
It brings sadness and sorrow, and a great many tears

Its a everyday thing now. but ive heard it for years
And its starting to bring out , the worse of my fears
In the morning when they wake up . they dont even smile
They havent done that in a very long while

I love them so much . but there hurting me so
i cant take the fighting . i feel i should go
Im trapped in there prison, where i shouldnt be
I just want to get out .. i want to be free

So im praying to you God for the first time in my life
Can i please have my parents back ... can u pull out the knife
Im praying so hard . i need to so bad .. i need the love in my life..
that we all once had
So if you can hear me ..Ill owe u so much .  
You know what i need ...its my parents loving touch
So if you can do this ..and make it all better..
Then ill know your the master. uve put a family together

Thankyou God for listening

chassidy 12 may 2003
Very beautiful writing, Very touching. Great job chass. :)
Great writing to u both, u have done it once again, and i too believe deeply that everything happens for a reason, there is a porpuse behind every little thing.
Excellent Poems!!  
I love reading them!
Keep it up!  You both have a talent, dont waste it!
You guys should publish it!

Sandy
i would like to dedicate this one to all the ppl who have met a special person online. it is realy a great feeling to have met somone online and grow close to . fellings online can be very  very real.. dont let anyone tell u online relationships mean nothing..they realy do

           ONLINE

I had a dream the other night
And u were in it too
We were running in a field 
Catching the morning dew
The sun was shining bright
and the wind blew thru your hair
and i could feel all the love
that you and me both share
The dream was so realistic
I could even feel your touch 
then i held you in my arms
and said... i love so so much
Although weve never met yet
I knew deep in my heart
this dream was trying to tell me
that we were close ..not far apart
ive told you many times before
that i promise we will meet
and i really truly mean this 
ill never accept defeat
let me leave you with this thought now                                                                                                                 as i lay down, to dream once more 
your the only one person in my heart 
your the one that i adore
You brighten up my every day 
you make me feel alive
your smiles ..yours charm your loving thoughts
are what helps me to survive
im so happy that we have met online
you brighten up my day
and dont forget my dearest friend
were not that far away


chassidy/13may/03
 
Wowsers chass, your doing wonderful work, I'm very impressed. You have a lot of talent. More then you might like to admit. :)
This might ring a bell, 

Then my mom ran the dog over when he pulled into the driveway last night, which distressed her so much she comitted suicide, leading to my dad running away to join the French Foreign Legion and causing me and my brothers to be placed into foster care with a family who's religion forbids homework.

Sorry Miss. Can I have an extra day?

this isnt a poem.. this is a song i wrote .. i wrote this for a friend  .. he played this song for his g/f but unfortunatly she didnt show for the concert .. she never did get to hear it and they went there seperate ways .. 

but here it is anyway .. maybe someone will relate to it .. .


           Tell Me Why


Its been three weeks or more
Since the last time i saw you 
I think about you every day 
And i dream about you too
Oh i remember all the things weve done
And all the things we've said
And i remember when i held you tight
But now..  you turn your head insted

Please tell my why
Oh did it ever even matter at all? 
Did you ever even care at all? 
How come you never ever answer my call ?                                                   Just to hear ...that i love you 

Please tell me why 
How come you never said it mattered at all? 
You know ill catch you any time that you fall
How come you never said you loved me at all?
Ive got to know

Oh well i feel that i dont mean much 
And i dont know what to do 
I feel that you dont hear much 
When i say that i love you
And well i know im not a dreamer
And you know my love is true
But it feels like you dont feel much
When i get real close to you
 
Three weeks ago it wasnt like that
you used to hold me in your arms
you used to smile and laugh and giggle
and pleasure all my charms
But now if  feel that you don't care much
and i just dont know what to do 
But girl you know.. . i'll always love you 
thru good or bad times too
I dont know what has happened
I just dont understand
three weeks ago ..you and me... were always hand in hand
So can you ........

Please tell me now
Does it even realy matter at all
if i catch you  when your starting to  fall ?
will you pick up the telephone  when i call?
to tell me if it realy matters at all
ive got to know


And so the next time that i see you 
I hope you'll under stand
i hope that you will love me 
and reach out with you hand
We've had so many good times 
And yes weve had some sad times too
but just please listen  when i tell you 
that i truly do love you

I guess ill leave you with your thoughts now
and ill wait for your reply
and ill sit right here for ever
just to hear you tell me why

Just tell me  
Why it should'nt even matter at all ?
or why you coould'nt even answer my calls?
or why it never even mattered at all? 
or  should i catch you when your starting to fall?                                    or why  i should'nt  even  love you at all ?
or why it  has'nt  ever  mattered at all ?
or why shoud'nt  i even  care at all?
or did you ever even love me at all?
or does it even really matter at all? 
ive got to know 

Please tell me why
that is beautiful. i feel like that right now. 
ty _chEEky_  i put it here for ppl to see .. oh i sure hope it didnt upset u to . it wasnt meant to upset anyone ..sry if it did 
 
 
 
 
Here is one maybe somone can relate to .. 

           The Dot


  I  got a demerit.. on my nick...  Cuz i was bad.. at the forum .
oh me.. oh my ...feels like a paw.. with a thorn
 
So i dont know now.. what to do 
But i better watch.. what i say 
but just when will that stupid... lil dot go away

About half past 8 ...i noticed it there
OOOOOh my god.. i nearly pulled ..out my hair
I dont think ..i desirved it .. cuz he is so a jerck
And you can bet now,.. he's sitting there... 
with his little smirk

The things that he said ...were definetly rude
he doesn't  think about people...
he  can  be really crude

but does it look like i care .
Na.. my dot will be gone .. 
and ill be back in pool ..
before very  long.

But i stand up for my comment 
others think i was right
But the next time i  on
ill  try to  be  more polite

Cuz somone didn't like it
now i got a black dot
Ill use a different nick next time 
mabye i'll avoid getting  cought

But for now a fare well
and to all a good night
Oh just  one more thing here 
FLYORDIE'S  a cool site...
I had to say that ...so fly don't get mad
cuz if i go get banned now.....my best friend will be sad
  
                Chassidy 15 may/ 2003


Just a lil humourous  poetry

NOTE: This poem is not intended  to make fun of..nor does it insult or damage the integraty of any particulaur individual...and does not colflict with the rules of the forum ...THAT I AM AWARE OF.. if it does  i am sorry .. i didnt know you werent allowed to post funny poetry in the forum .. just thought maybe  someone needed a smile or might make a few people laugh that might need  one today  .. sry if anyone feels pointed at ..or made fun of .. or unsulted in any way shape or form. if you think so then u must be reading my sence of humour wrong...
Holy im starting to sound like Mr whatz his name
That's great, I love that poem. Made me laugh. :D
  It sure is nice to see somone get a smile or a chuckle around here...General Hawk  ..sure beats ppl gettin ridiculed and or insulted doesn't it .. ty for the hahaha's ..have a nice day..:)


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Hey Chass,
that poem really got 2 me...thx 4 writing it. 
Very VERY nice Linda! Bravo! I totally relate to that poem.(The first one I mean)Good work! Tell me if this is good Linda.

Approaching night
Gently wraps
Her sequined cloak of glittering stars
Around a troubled earth

Sleep now and night will help
To heal the worried mind of anxious men
And respite
Bring back to life rejected

Problems of the day subside
Hidden in night's protective veil
Come quikly night
And soothe all pain

Refresh and make a man
Make him whole again
Befoer the dawn apears anew
Weeping once more her morning dews
Another installment very soon
And then i will bend a spoon

Im not taking this poetry serious
Because i am becoming delirious

Im just doing this for a schoolboy laugh
Doing poetry to hone my craft

Pretty soon i will be a master
And will fill rooms up with laughter

The more i practice the talent will be growing
And from the start rhymes will be flowing

So maybe soon i will come back
With a talent with which now i lack


god as u can see i cant do this and im bored at skewl
um, Chris babe? except for the last 1, your just wasting space. plz dont spam this was a somewhat serious topic
now i'll try this thing again

>>LOST LOVE

Winter's white fingures
Frosting branches
Trees and fields
Move silently on

White winter tress pose
Adorned in lace robes of snow
Temporary guise

A soft gentle carried on the evening breeze
Whispers "He is here"

Haunting melody
Sad requiem for lost love
Always remembered

>Lol I aint very good at this poetry thing, but i try
Respect read?


4.1 Technical destruction: large pictures, empty messages or any other action which changes the size of the forum or hinders its regular use.
 
not mean any disrespect but its against the rules
I Swear

The wind is whispering
The rising moon
Puts a spell upon my heart
Under stars-Twinkling high above
When l close my eyes
We'r dancing into the flame

l won't spend
Finally time to decide 
Stuck here in the same old bind

l'll be there 
By the moon and the stars
Like a shadow that's by your side 
l swear
I love you Chassidy your lovely:D:D:D

I love these games I dunno why,
They get into your soul and will never die,
Sometimes I chat sometimes I don't,
But if I do its what makes this site what others are not,

I can be humorous, naughty and sometimes not very nice,
Then they ban me and sometimes they don't,
Either way I'm happy with my lot,
Some MODs are cool and others are not,
I won’t mention names but I luv Streamy a lot,

Once I challenged a player and had to do it again and again,
So he quite politely whispered me to go away,
Well I was feeling quite contentious and told him what I thought,
This went on for ages and we played a game whilst we fought,
Now we are best of buddy’s and he is a good sport,

Now I was playing a game and this player did a lucky shot,
So I said you lucky f***,
Do you wanna be banned was his retort,
I thought calm down sonny,
I was only saying what I thought,
Then he grassed me up and I was instantly banned, 
No warning no comment just a two day ban,
Now you can imagine my anger at such an over reaction.

So hear is my poem,
I’ve said what I thought,
My last comment was pulled,
It happens a lot,
I’ve mentioned no names, 
So let it stand,
It’s quite entertaining when everything rhymes.
 
Gray Rainy Day


Tiny ripples pierce the bronzy surface
Of still waters filled with autumn's gown,
Tears of heaven's sorrow
Gently falling down.
Silently they touch the
Cracked and broken earth.
No song bird left to sing
Of joyousness and mirth.
My heart cries out in pain
That I can share this beauty with no one,
So I walk alone in a world with cloud-bound sun.
My arms wrap around me tight,
Seeking warmth for my skin.
The soft and gray dim light
Chases shadows in calm wind.
Serenity sets, and peace is found within.
Thanks X-Honna...maybe I'll dig up another one :P  Been a long time since I've written poetry
erm this post is like a yr old??? Lone's poems r still awesome tho huh.
 A silly one I wrote about the how we get too many messenger windows open at once.  Hope you  enjoy!

One Window Too Many

Omg that was so LMAO!
oh no, where did u go?
brb, she said to me
hb, hb, u know me! 
I must know what.....
BRB
again?   
will I ever hear the end? 
I'm back, wb, I say
ty, yw, very mannered thing to say
BRB. grrrrrrrrr
*** will I ever know
soon I gotta go.
They did it, it was true
did what, I ask of you?
Been so long I forgot
what was we talking about?
I got to go m8
I 4got I got a d8!
lol (h) & (k) c ya l8r.
Inappropriate content / message removed.

This nick name,(Randy Santa.) previously banished for same conduct also removed from the site.


[Edited by: FORUMS MODERATOR on May 28, 2004 7:48 AM]
CALM

Yes, this world is beautiful and shining.
It calms and softens my soul.
Even if this proves that my soul is funny or crazy or broken.
Even so, it makes me happy to believe this.
l want to treasure the presant when l can believe this.






>Extra:This world is not beautiful. Therefore it is.
Morning poem:

 I woke up early one morning...
 The earth lay cool and still
 But suddenly a tiny bird
 perched on my window sill

 It sang so softly 
 so lovely and so gay
 that suddenly all my troubles 
 began to slip away...

 It sang of far of places
 of laughter and of fun
 and slowly his lovely song
 brought up the morning sun

 I sneaked beneath the covers...
 crept slowly out of bed...
 then gently shut the window 
 and crushed his f***ing head.

 I am not a morning person.
lol i like that 1 :p' its the truth i hate waking up..tho i hate going to sleep also :('
Hello, I got a little poem (if it is a poem). Didn't wrote it tho. Just one i can't forget :)


Smile to evreyone
But give your heart to the only one.


Here is one, someting very different:


You never know when the world is gonna blow
and if it's gonna... you got to go go go !!!?


Here is a poem in dutch (for the people that can read)it :)


Maak nieuwe vrienden 
maar behoud de ouden
de nieuwe zijn zilveren
en de oude gouden
Hello.. I got another one.. and hmm last one was:

Give your smile 
to evreyone*
but your heart
to the only one

Shy? or Fears?

Am I too shy
even to say hi?
too shy...
i dunno, why?

Or am i too scared for my fears?
dunno, maybe i can say it into 'tears'?

I feel empty, is it cause I don't got a soul?
or just I rarely use my brains?

But hey- Who cares?

I don't like to be smard
or  have a frozen heart.

Why does people want to shine
in the sunny light?
and always wants to be bright.

ps: I know my Englesh is bad
but Hey- I don't feel sad.
Anyways- Who cares?


Doesn't really read in a nice ritme, but Hey- who cares? :p
"Maak nieuwe vrienden 
maar behoud de ouden
de nieuwe zijn zilveren
en de oude gouden"

translation: make new friends, but keep the old, one is silver; the other, gold =) very nice wirindre
Lol this JUST poped in my head. Ok, ok....let's see here. Tell me if it's any good. Since l am just making it up as l go lol. :p

l sit upon my chair thinking
Laying down to wonder if you are winking
Winking at me or at nothing
Maybe your at all
l could never tell
You were to tall
You fought away all my fears 
Wiped away my tears
l can only linger in you death
you said l love you 
With your last breath
Why did you have to go
Your lips they were oh-oh
Can't get you out 
Out of my head
l sit and pout
Just all about the way we used to share
Share things about our past
Our hearts and souls became bare
As everthing we'd gladly share
We were so close 
And yet so far
We met eachother at the bar
You bought me a drink 
And l excepted
Though you weren't at all what l exspected
We began to talk
Then we would walk
You walked me home
You held my hand
You told about your dream to join a band
We were alone 
And l said l love you
You looked at me 
You blushed and turned red
Then you said to go to bed
Like l was your little girl
Like you knew me all my life
The next youasked me to be your new wife
I said yes
Then you died 
And told Wes not to worry
Said he was the man of the house
He's 16 and has a spouse
You told to
Watch over me
And you spoke to only me
Asked him to leave
And he refused
l showed him out 
And saw his pout
Just like yours
You spoke to me 
And l had tears
You fought away all of my fears
Wiped away that one tear
l can't help but linger in you death
You said l love you 
With your last breath




>>>Here's 1 i got from Free Fall
>>>l can kinda relate with this in some ways and just thought it was coolie :) Keep up the good work J ;)


One day l was sitting, watching the world pass me by
The next l was waiting, waiting to die
Life didn't seem to have a point anymore. What was the point of trying to fly?
When l kept getting up, my feet flipped out from underneath me, seemingly,  not even wanting me to try

But then l met this person, and he changed my life around
He's the best friend i'v ever had. He's the best friend i'v ever found

l'm sure if you have a special person like this in your life, you'll get where i'm comming from, cos until l met this guy, l didn't feel like l belonged

But now every day l have something to look foward too
And l just wanna tell you buddy, how much that l adore you!
Your the best, you easily beat the rest
So thank you for being you mate
And finding me before it was to late




X i already told u, dont bring back my poems plz because i really dont want u to. y did u go bring it back? 
lol sry Free fall 
l brought it back because l liked it and l didnt think your poems should sit and collect dust
so to say :p 
Sry :(
l didnt want to copy so i said it was from u atleast ;) rite? :\
Ok, well sry :( 
plz no mad? :)
X i also explained y i didnt want them brougth back, dude i dont see y u just left it where it was, if ppl wanted to see poems they could do a search on it.
yes mad but dont wanna get banned lol :|
:( sry
l don't remmy u explaining and l won't bring any others of your back. Kk?
l poromise :)
Sry again
k sry for bein mad:p howa ya btw?
:) yay! Lol thanx :p
i aint 2 shabby thanx very mooch :p 
u? ? ? ?