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Dont feel  bad
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Dont feel  bad
                  
 "Don't Feel Bad"



Do you think your life's hard and you have it rough?
Try not eating for days cause there's not enough.
You can't get a boyfriend so you cry and you b_tch,
What about those people who live in a ditch.?

You Can go to the movies but cant aford your   rent
I'm not giving a lecture,but  where has it went?
Do you even think about any of this,
Or do you just live your life and the rest you dismiss.

Have you ever thought for a minute that it could have been you,
You could be the bum on the street with one boot and one shoe.
Let me guess you think that you are too smart,
What about that guy who got shot while he walked through the park.

I don't know if you care ,I'm just adressing an issue,
If you even need one I can get you a tissue.
But if your like me, you think all the time,
Feel bad if you want but give some thought to this rhyme. 

 
wtz rong Purέ Şκιll 


u should talke  cough medicine for that  cough ;)
not bad...few errors as far placement of certain words, and also it's "afford" not "aford" ;)
typos dont mean anything m8  its the  point of the  mater thats counts
and whats the point?went right over my head........
The point is...DON'T BE EMO!!!
hara kiri 
lol   dont me emotional:S  without emotions we would all b like robots 
peer pressure 
 If you had a head it mightened have gone over it;)
I ment emo as in you dress like an idiot and cut your arm if you can't get a girlfriend.
still dont follow what your saying new:|??
It's a poem dedicated to hobos. :)